[Random Art browsing review!] Nice! The color choice is very nice!
I feel the proportions do clash a little with the more realistic style, though. The neck is accurate to the head in proportion, but then torso is tiny!
Also, if you're using traditional art, try to adjust the colors intensity a little in an edit program next time! Specially to get rid of the 'ugly ink black' that scanners turn lineart into. Just making the colors pop a little and making the blacks a little more rich (a very simple way to do this is turning the blacks into a very dark color instead of a neutral dark grey) would do the trick!